>>2486
Pretty nice. The art style is too silly for my taste, but translating the manga to bring activity to the site is a really good idea.
Just two things:
1) Try to center more your text. I noticed that you tend to align some words to the left, which clashes a lot with the parts that are properly centered and makes everything look more amateur. I don't know what program you're using to add the text, but it should have a setting to automatically center things.
2) I know sadpanda is the way to go for publishing translated doujin, but you should upload your works on more sites. Not only you create redundancy and reduce the chances of losing your works forever because X site died, but it'll also increase the amount of potential readers of your works (and therefore potential visitors for 8moe).
That said, thanks again for your work, and I hope you keep translating doujin (and maybe non-H manga in the future).