Part one is okay. I like it, part 2 has issues that bug me. But it also has the oberstleutenant. A video game nazi given the power to act in the real world through robots. Robots with a thousand knives. And what does this AI do? It tortures feds to death. In fairly graphic detail. Easily my favorite parts.

>>311 How is being opposed to revenge "SJW"?

>>397 Well it's been 7 months, but I think there was some boohoo poor indians stuff. Lots of muscle chicks what don't need no man. That kinda eye rolling silliness. But ignore those bits, cause they suck and add nothing to the story, and its enjoyable enough. I guess having badass robodude break down crying because he gets massively downvoted by sjw types at the end of book three still pisses me off.

Okay meta notes. I like writing here because it brings notice to anons board and I like him, and I like drawing attention here, this is a much more sfw board than >>>/lit/ however and this book can't really be finished here, so I'm gonna do what we can here before eventually moving the whole thing to /lit/ Heads up for future notice, when it happens I will announce it and provide a link. Probably a month from that happening though. Anyway as always thanks to anon for keeping a clean, spamfree board to write in, and thanks for his help when it's needed on projects. Looking forward to finally finishing a story for once, let's hope this is the one that actually gets to those magic words. "The end."

The idea is silly as shit, but more power to you. That said, no steamy BDSM smut on muh precious ded board.

>>514 >I needed him violent off the bat, because I find that easier to write Just remember the target are regular white girls. Don't take it too far. I think being as violent as a marvel movie is a safe bet >>515 Godspeed anon >>516 kek

>>370 "Closing in ten minutes!" A bored looking male barista with two earrings lets out in a falsetto. Sheila glances down at her half finished macchiato, then puts away her iphone with the buzzfeed article half read. I'll finish it on the subway she thinks as she sips her cold milky coffee. Zipping up her purse she stands and heads towards the exit. A black youth sitting in the back smiles and stands up, following her towards the exit. Sheila doesn't get more than ten steps out of the starbucks before wondering how those inhuman police could have gunned down that innocent African-American. He had just finished highschool and was applying to yale the article on buzzfeed had said, and she just couldn't understand those racist savages in blue, pausing on the sidewalk she unzips her purse to get at her iphone. Suddenly her arm is grabbed and she feels herself being pulled into the narrow alley between the starbucks and the borders book store. "You say anything and I'll cut your fucking throat bitch" a low black voice utters into her ear as she feels something sharp prod her in the small of her back. Stifling a cry she tries to turn and find out what's going on when another hand clamps over her mouth. She is thrown into a dumpster and falls as the hot red blood gushes from a gash on her forehead. "Fuck it we gonna have some fun first whore" She look up through the red haze as a black male who looks to be about 16 advances towards her with a rusty switchblade held blade up in his right palm, a large smile splits his face, and suddenly she understands what is happening but not why. So she does the worst thing she could do and screams. His smile disappears and his face lights up with rage "Goddamnit you cracker whore I told you what was going to happen!" The barista passes the alley, the streetlights showing sheila him in full detail as his face jerks away from the scene and he steps away.

Obviously wont be in any final version book or otherwise, but here's what is probably blasting from his stereo as our hero makes his escape from a biased justice system. >a file had a format not allowed by the server. >mp3. Ugh lets try this then https://files.catbox.moe/d4rk7t.mp3 https://files.catbox.moe/i5pc0b.mp3

>>371 I started reading it expecting just some pol humor greentext kind of thing but this is pretty good anon. The biker stereotype fits pretty well. Just remember he has to be high status like CEO or something >Sheila Not a better name? kek >Sheila can't believe this is happening, she attended a BLM protest last month, and always donated to the NAACP. This feels a bit of a caricature though. I think it would be better like >Sheila couldn't believe it. How could she deserve it? She attended a BLM protest last month, and practiced everything she learned at the african-american studies subject. She has always fought racism. Idk I think mentioning NAACP feels unnatural. Normies are pretty ignorant >he is white, and he is violent Kek >>372

>>120 big letters can play on that entire side, small letters can play only in that specific side not pictured: goalkeeper, which is the lone guy who stands in the goal area >>121 /v/ only plays as zzz/v/ and Mark's /v/ only has a Gamergate team afaik

>>122 Yeah whatever the GG team. Hell if they already have a team we could move that forward to august. Or even late july really.

Anon.cafe/pol/ recently got purged, you can have our team if you want. https://anon.cafe/icup/res/1662.html

Two books in is a good time to talk about the cap'n. I am not entirely sure what the authors intent is for several scenes. Nick comes across as slightly deranged. It reminds me of zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance. In that the author there was an asshole, and didn't know it. So his character's tend to do weird fucked up shit. Similar here, although the extenuating circumstances that Nick goes through could explain his behavior. I think we are supposed to be seeing a man on the edge of a nervous breakdown. When he is likeable it is despite his massive character flaws, or perhaps it is when he isn't concerned with trivialities. Very little Vax in this book. A shame as he is an interesting character in his own right, and is seen very little of in the third book. What these characters are feeling, or why they behave as they do is troubling to me. I don't know if its inconsistent writing or if David had a point. Or maybe he understood people better than me. If he did I wish I knew what exactly he knew about humanity.

>>269 Oh yeah theres a cool murder suicide thing. And a serial killer. I mean basic emps children shit basically. All involving remembrancer artists.

>>228 here's one lazily thrown together

>>229 >lazily thrown together well it looks kino to me good shit

>>229 Oh shit yea. Hold on adding it

>>30 Some of them can be okay. And plus for things like metal gear solid it provides an opportunity to flesh characters out more than its original media allowed.

>>16 Is this novel actually a novelization of a previous story, or a new story just based on properties originally from other media? I know a lot of novels based on comic book characters, but only a few that actually attempt to adapt comic book stories into novel form. But then why would I want to read the novel version of The Crisis on Infinite Earths, when I could just read the actual comic it's based on? An odd case I've always been looking for a place to discuss is this Spider-Man novel, Mayhem in Manhattan. I think it was the first Marvel novel, or at least it was the first in this series. But the odd thing about it is that it's canon to the actual comics, and referenced in an actual issue, somewhere around Amazing Spider-Man #200, from the late '70s (I forget the exact issue, as it's been a few years). I remember I was slowly reading through all of Spider-Man (including the spinoffs, Spectacular Spider-Man and Marvel Team-Up, where Spidey teams up with someone else every issue), when suddenly in one issue Spidey references the fact that Doctor Octopus has died, and the editor's note, which usually lists an issue number, instead cited this novel. So I went on Ebay and Amazon and stuff, and couldn't find a copy for like a year, but eventually I found it, for a reasonable price, and it was actually pretty good. It's written by comics veterans Len Wein and Marv Wolfman, and everything I've read from them is great. It's nothing mindblowing, but their Spider-Man comics from the time were great, and this novel is additional material of the same quality. Doctor Octopus has some plan involving an oil company or something and Spidey goes on one of his more far-reaching adventures to stop him. A little more epic than the average issue of Amazing or Spectacular Spider-Man, where he generally fights more street level plots, but then again, he was going to space like every month in Marvel Team-Up, so this isn't that epic compared to those. I wonder if the rest of the Marvel Pocket Novel Series, of which this is the first (according to the back of the book), is canon to the comics. I haven't come across any more comics that reference a novel as being canon, but I wouldn't be surprised if this particular series at least was made to be canon. I know I have some Spider-Man and X-Men novels from the '90s, and as far as I can tell, they are not canon, but I'm also not as knowledgeable about '90s Marvel as I am about '70s Spider-Man, so I could be mistaken there.

>>84 Not sure. But it has spiderman on the cover and it looks like a book so we will take it. Ah wolfman, and wein yeah above average for the bullpen even at the time. A lot of the older comics had two to three page short stories along with the actual comic material. Early writers got a start doing those backup stories. I dont remember when but yeah at some point they had a paperback division. The early stories being canon, and shilled in the comic is hardly surprising. Marvel did that a lot I recall. Cant read my old xmen without seeing the letters section pimping something that never went anywhere. That being said in the 90's these kind of books were pretty widely available. I bought a ton. I only have a couple now, but yeah usually a good read. The format allows for longer form, and more intricate stories. I have always had a weakness for xmen material from the time. Some of which are also canon. Yes good find OP. I wish there was an epub. I would love to read it some time.